It

Before I get into "It"... what ever "It" happens to be... I would like to direct your attention to the "Quote of the week" section on the right there. Basically, every week I will look deep into my script and give you one "Fresh and Funny" one liner to show that not only am I working on the script, it is infact funny (at least in some way, shape, or form).

This week I have been working hard (READ: Hardly working) to make new edits to my script. Because it was Uber hot the last time people read it, I thought it wouldn't take much effort. But as it turns out, my writing even bores me on ocasion, so it was time to make a change... and belive me my friends changes have been made!

The biggest/most important change I think is I removed the "Asshole" speach. The asshole speach, for those of you who don't know, was a dialague between Trevor and Katrina. During this dialauge, an extreemly drunk Trevor explaines that he wants to be an asshole so that people don't give him shit.

Not only was this speach BORING beyond belife, but it also did nothing to advance the plot, or make me care for the characters. In the end, I opted for a more personal touch to the scene, and even added more depth to the all but two dimensional Katrina.

Infact, for the most part, when I added or subtracted I choose to do so because I wanted to give more to the characters that what they had... emotionally elevating them to a new level.

but enough bullshit for this week... I need to go watch TV.